We were learning about writing a piece of writing that is about being in the 100m sprint at the olympics and describing how we would of felt during this moment in life.
I found it hard to describe how I felt in this moment because I have never been in this part of life before and this could happen in real life but it's made up./
I found it easy to think were I was because in my brain it comes up with a creative place and I mean the creative place doesn't have any thing that are not real.
Next time I will deceived a bit more how I felt at the start of the race and at the end of the race there wasn't enough words how I felt and I just said I win the 100m race.
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